Proposal Writing Testimonials


Good morning Shelly,

TTGI received good news this morning. We were selected for an OASIS SB Pool 1 BPA. We extend our heartfelt thanks to you and your team for all of the hard work to stay on top of the twists and turns of this process. Your organization, templates, and timely updates on information were extremely helpful.

I also want to personally say what a pleasure it was to work with Kristin Bales. She is sharp, incredibly knowledgeable, and the hardest working person I know.

Thank you again, and have a wonderful day,

JJ Halverson
The Tolliver Group, Inc.


I know you already received a note from JJ already, but I want to also tell you how much we appreciate all you’ve done for TTGI. Beside the outstanding support you’ve provided over the last couple years, and 3 significant wins - you’re truly a pleasure to work with. I can’t tell you how much we appreciate you and hope you let us count you as a member of the TTGI team. Thanks for all,

Bob Woods
The Tolliver Group, Inc.


Sorry this email is a week+ overdue.

We’d like to thank FedMarket and especially Kristin Bales for the support on an outstanding DISA SETI proposal delivery on April 4th.

Kristin made herself available to the entire Ennoble First support team evenings and weekends. I believe she worked 9 or 10 hours the Sunday before delivery polishing our work and guiding us through the steps necessary to submit a high quality product. She held us to timelines, set expectations for our respective data calls, and kept us on track throughout the entire experience.

We are very pleased with our FedMarket experience and the professionalism of Kristin Bales. You truly have a gem with her.

All the best,


Seven Anderson, CM
Director of Operations
Ennoble First Corporation

I just received an email from the Navy stating that we indeed were awarded a Seaport e contract!

I would like to thank you personally and your Fedmarket team for all of your help in guiding us toward this contract.

In the coming months, I believe we will re-engage with you concerning GSA schedules and possibly OASIS (if they have another on ramp). We were told by our Department of State POCs that they use OASIS exclusively.

In any event, thank you for your help and we should be contacting you soon for GSA schedule assistance.

Best Regards,
Jason Hicks
Director of Contracts
Southeast Aerospace

We were just awarded Whitney and Aquilla. Great job!

Clayton Reed
PureService Corporation

Hi Kristin,

I hope all is well with you. Again I want to sincerely thank you for a job well done. I know this project proposal was a rush and time consuming to say the least, however we got it done. I am very grateful to you for all your hard work and putting up with me the likes of me.

I look forward to working with you in the future in respect to another proposal project.

Please convey my deepest appreciation to Mr. Richard White and also to Marty.

Of course I will keep you posted on the out coming of the tender, (update Evan’s company won the bid)

Sincerely appreciate your work.

Evan N. Spencer

Spence Security & Investigation Services Ltd.

You all did one remarkable job for us on Alliant SB and we’ll most definitely use your services again in the future.

Kind regards,
Kirk Phillips
BAM Technologies


I want to let you know that we received the pre-award notification of successful offerors yesterday and we made in both SB Pool1 and Pool2. They have selected only 9 companies in Pool1 and 26 in Pool2.

Thanks so much for all the guidance and help along the way with technical and pricing to make this happen. I really really appreciate your help!!

Looking forward to finalizing our CIO-SP3 bid and winning it now!!!!


Rakhi Sharma | President
Rigil Corporation
Woman Owned 8(a) SDB,

Thank you, United Builders won a seat on a VA Construction MATOC. Add another win to the list.

United Builders
Tucson, AZ


I hope you are doing so wonderful. You may be in loop, that I and Kristin were working together on our proposal. She is great in her job. I did all my best to provide her as much materials as I could for different sections, and parts of the proposal. We are nearly done with final draft copy. But there are still some missing parts that I want you to support her; please consult with Mr. Richard if he could have a final review or to share his thoughts on remaining responses. Appreciating your all support, and am so happy having you in this proposal. Thanks again!

Very Respectfully,
Hekmat Naziri
Business Development Manager

Kristin and Richard,

Thank you very much for fulfilling and expediting this proposal. I could not have asked for a better team. I will let you know if I get the contract. I am so appreciative of your expertise and fast-paced results. You are the best!! I hope to continue our professional association.

Best regards,
Speech Potential Associates

Thanks for checking into that Toby. I know Maggie and Cathy were very pleased at how good Kristen was to work with. Now that the RFP response is out, we will be taking a little time to regroup and reconnect on our overall program. It will likely be a few weeks until we revisit the GSA Schedule question, though now that we are more familiar with the process (and Kristen’s expertise), I expect we will have more confidence than ever to press forward and pursue a GSA schedule with your help.

Thanks for staying in touch.

Murray Greenwood
Paladino and Company

Hi Kristin,

Just wanted to let you know that we shipped the package off today. It looked great. Thank you so much for your help. This was a new frontier for us and it was so useful to have your expertise. Really appreciate you putting your nights and weekends into this and being so responsive during the process. I can't say I enjoyed the process (ha!) but I did enjoy working with you! 

Thanks again,

Maggie Santolla

Marketing Communications Manager

Paladino and Company


I extend my appreciation again for your help on our last proposal.

We have another one on the horizon, and this one is due next week 2/15, provided.

Ruchman and Associates


Just want to let you know Campbell Construction won a spot on the Multiple Award IDIQ you helped them with in December/January! Another one to add to the list of successes!

Campbell Construction


We want to send a sincere thank you for all of your efforts on our St. Louis Facilities Maintenance proposal. Your patience and perseverance – both through our learning curve and your own personal hardships – were critical to us getting our proposal submitted on time and looking sharp. We sincerely appreciate your guidance and professionalism throughout the process and, now, hope that you’ll join us in crossing our fingers until we find out the results!


Jeremy R Jacobs/Ryan Companies US, Inc

Dear Kristin

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I appreciate all what you have done to finish our proposal. If you one day planning to visit anywhere on the middle east I will be very happy to organize for you everything you may need with all my pleasure.

Thanks and Best Regards
Hossam Kamal
Operation Manager
Al Ola Tourism L.L.C